Blue Flame

by invisibility_disability

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“So,” the ancient man said in a crackly voice, “you must be the girl I keep hearing all about, eh?” The old man smiled a wrinkly smile at Kamaria.
She looked at Aedin questioningly, and he shook his head ever so slightly. Later, his voice whispered in her head.
Aedin took the man by the arm and muttered something to him. The old man bobbed his head like a turkey when he nodded, and his extra flabs of skin on his neck flapped around like wings.
Aedin led the old man and Kamaria down the steps into a dimly lit cavern. Kamaria noticed the blue torches on the walls, about every 30 feet. How did they get the fire to burn blue? she thought.
STOP ASKING QUESTIONS ! I TOLD YOU I WOULD EXPLAIN LATER ! Aedin’s voice echoed in her head, and she saw his violet eyes reflecting the bright blue flames, glaring menacingly at her. I’m sorry, Kamaria. Just… try not to think. Follow me, his voice told her as he turned a corner.
Kamaria gasped at what she saw: hundreds of beautiful, extremely pale people.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    lilfroggie1007's Buddy Icon lilfroggie1007

    Posted 5 months ago

    oooooooooooh….then what happens?

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    invisibility_disability's Buddy Icon invisibility_disability

    Posted 5 months ago

    once again, doing something lame here. i apologize, but…
    about fifteen thousand different people have asked me how to pronounce “kamaria.”
    here’s the phanetic (i’m prettttty sure i spelled that totally wrong) way to spell her name:
    kuh-MARR-ee-uh

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    paper flowers' Buddy Icon paper flowers

    Posted 5 months ago

    good job, invisibility! hmmm…what should happen next? i guess i’ll have to do some brain storming

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    wytherwings' Buddy Icon wytherwings

    Posted 5 months ago

    wow, wat now?
    good luck brainstorming, paper flowers!!

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    heartbeats echocho's Buddy Icon heartbeats echocho

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i def echo wytherwings…good luck!
    this series kicks butt you guys! keep up the awesome work…
    LoA

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    NightMaiden's Buddy Icon NightMaiden

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    aahahh wonderful!!! keep going i- MUST Know what happens!!

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    Disturbed Youth's Buddy Icon Disturbed Youth

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    lucky you pf. i dont!!! :)

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    Disturbed Youth's Buddy Icon Disturbed Youth

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    lucky you pf. i dont!!! :)

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