traveling.

by invisibility_disability

“take it,” a british male voice in my head said. (where did that come from?)
i’m not going to take it! i thought back, it’s not mine!
“it’s in your closet,” the voice responded. “it might as well be yours.”
no, i retorted, i can’t just take it!
“well, at least try it on. what harm could it do?” the voice said.
oh… well… okay.

i took the dress out of the box and laid it out on the bed.
it’s so beautiful, i thought as i untied the back.
i started to change into it, and it fit perfectly. i looked at the amazing black and purple, intricately laced dress in my full-length mirror. this is so weird… hey, i could wear this to the dance instead of that stupid red dress! i thought, then i passed out.

the next thing i knew, it was daylight, a light autumn breeze was rustling my fuschia hair, dead leaves were cushioning my bruised face, and i felt a sword being prodded into my back.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. traveling.

    lilfroggie1007's Buddy Icon lilfroggie1007

    Posted 7 months ago

    whoa. ow.

  2. traveling.

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 7 months ago

    hmm

    plot twist muchly?

  3. traveling.

    paper flowers' Buddy Icon paper flowers

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    funny, OrangeOreos.
    Wow didn’t see that coming!
    LoA

  4. traveling.

    heartbeats echocho's Buddy Icon heartbeats echocho

    Posted 7 months ago

    o.O interesting….
    this series is incredable, invisy. you’ve got me waiting impatiently for more.
    LoA

  5. traveling.

    NightMaiden's Buddy Icon NightMaiden

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    aiiiee sword alert!

  6. traveling.

    paper flowers' Buddy Icon paper flowers

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    yes! i love it!
    LoA

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