Izzy's Capture

by Nouvelle Bardot

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John eventually overpowered Renard’s slaps, and brought him down with a single punch to the face. His body crashed to the floor. Izzy tried to make a run for the door, but was stopped short by the entrance of Pablo.

“I should have known it was you,” John growled.

“Bella, Bella, Bella, you thought you got away so easily?” Pablo said with a laugh. Izzy glared at him with contempt and took a step back. The men lunged for her, grasping her flailing arms and holding her down on the floor.

She struggled under the grips of the two men, but would not admit her defeat. She spit in each of their faces and smiled coyly.

“Dirty bastards!” she yelled.

Renard crawled silently from behind, still half concious, grasping desperately for the gun on the floor.

“Come now Bella,” Pablo said pulling her up, “We have someone you need to meet.”

A gun fired. Once, twice. The two men hit the floor. Izzy met Renard’s shocked expression.

“I guess it was loaded after all,” she said, stunned.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Izzy's Capture

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 4 months ago

    So, was it Pablo’s gun? she didn’t seem to know it was loaded, and will they survive, John and Pablo? I mean Renard’s aim…..with his tics…..and will the good or the bad guys win?
    LoA

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    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    So many questions…and ha, that was great. “Guess it was loaded after all.” Sequel?

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree with emma jo, that is one heck of a last line. Awesome!
    LoA

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    Nouvelle Bardot's Buddy Icon Nouvelle Bardot

    Posted 4 months ago

    i decided to rewrite this series as a script for a play for my final in creative writing, it was just too tempting.

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Hey, good on ya’ for making something productive out of this. Do Culture Shock and I get collaborator credit, or did you edit out our bits?
    Sequel done, and hoo boy, it got a little dark. My apologies in advance for that one.

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    Culture Shock w/ Mike Schwartz's Buddy Icon Culture Shock w/ Mike Schwartz

    Posted 4 months ago

    Ok so… Pablo is an ex-italian officer and possibly him and John are connected with the Brazilian Mafia… and John works for Pierre… Now why would Pierre draw the attention of a spy/mafiosa???

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