Thief of the King's Luscious Ranch Dressing (Snoopy Challenge)

by OrangeOreos

A light snow was falling, and the little girl with the tattered shawl had not sold a violet all day. She walked slowly past the towering houses on this rich street in London. The only rich street in London, because of the king!

While millions of people were starving, the king lived in luxury. The girl stared longingly at the massive castle. Suddenly, a shot rang out! A door slammed. The maid screamed. That maid sounded like her mother, who worked as a servant for the king! She ran towards the castle!

The girl ran into the back room! Two men rolled on the ground, grappling beneath the murderous hooves. A man in a black coat was fighting her father. Her mother had taken a huge stuffed deer and was trying to hit the thief! He had been trying to escape with the luscious ranch dressing of the king! A left and a right! A left and another left! An uppercut to the jaw! Then, her mother finally landed a solid blow on the stranger and he collapsed. The fight was over, and so the ranch was saved. Yes!

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Thief of the King's Luscious Ranch Dressing (Snoopy Challenge)

    paper flowers' Buddy Icon paper flowers

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    haha…that was great! Very creative. luscious ranch dressing brilliant!
    LoA

  2. Thief of the King's Luscious Ranch Dressing (Snoopy Challenge)

    BARomero's Buddy Icon BARomero

    Posted 6 months ago

    And seven lines used! The bar is set pretty high right off the bat!

  3. Thief of the King's Luscious Ranch Dressing (Snoopy Challenge)

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 6 months ago

    very well done.. hard to beat that…
    LoA

  4. Thief of the King's Luscious Ranch Dressing (Snoopy Challenge)

    lilfroggie1007's Buddy Icon lilfroggie1007

    Posted 6 months ago

    lol. i loved it. tho i did get abit confuzzled from not actually reading what the challenge was about first. my fault. huge stuffed deer. honestly. funny.

  5. Thief of the King's Luscious Ranch Dressing (Snoopy Challenge)

    Dragon_sun 515's Buddy Icon Dragon_sun 515

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Omg I think you’ve outdone yourself with this one. A huge stuffed deer honestly!

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