What happened so long ago(hidden challenge)

by J.B. Williams

“So, did you figure out why is he so afraid of her?”

“He is trembling in fear of her; she is fifteen years his senior. Even her sneeze frightens him.”

“Right, genius. All of us already know that. Probably pulled a gun on him and got rid of it before we came.”

“Everyone already said that. Don’t you pay attention when people talk?”

“He is so much bigger than her. I just can’t figure out why he didn’t beat her up or defend himself while she was striking him with the lamp, alledgedly.”

“Maybe if we get a therapist in here we can get to the bottom of this domestic disturbance…”

Comments

  1. What happened so long ago(hidden challenge)

    J.B. Williams' Buddy Icon J.B. Williams

    Posted 9 months ago

    Well, it wasn’t easy but I did it in. I’ll probably write another one.

  2. What happened so long ago(hidden challenge)

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 9 months ago

    Wow. I love how what happened was hiddden inside the story. Thanks for entering! And please feel free to enter again!
    LoA

  3. What happened so long ago(hidden challenge)

    Tarmaie's Buddy Icon Tarmaie

    Posted 9 months ago

    What? I’m lost… someone help me.

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