Run

by Ben Paddon

“RUN!” you shout. Before long, you’re rushing through the jungle. Vines and branches thwack against you as you zoom past, but you’re too fuelled by adrenaline to really focus on where you’re going.

Before long, you’re deep in the heart of a very thick jungle. You don’t know how long you’ve been running for, and Joe and Zoe aren’t with you anymore. Hopefully you only got split up. You daren’t consider the alternative.

You suddenly realise you’ve reached a small clearing. A dried patch of ground, slightly indented, suggests this may have been a small pond at one point. To the side is a tree, which has grown leaning over where the pond was, shading it. Attached to the tree is a rope – at one end is a log. At another is a rotting corpse. You cover your nose when the smell hits you.

What do you do now?

Go back and look for Joe and Zoe
Climb the tree in the hopes you can see more of the island from the top
Check the body

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    Ben Paddon's Buddy Icon Ben Paddon

    Posted 7 months ago

    Please read “The Rules” before sequelling.
    http://ficlets.com/stories/21279

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    passionate4pens' Buddy Icon passionate4pens

    Posted 7 months ago

    this is very descriptive, i like it. i can feel the terror pumping through their veins. well done.

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    NightMaiden's Buddy Icon NightMaiden

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I’ll sequel this one! I’m loving where this is going.

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