The Vengeance(hidden message challenge)

by J.B. Williams

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“Some think of it as the end of days; this will be the end of him. Vengeance will be ours. He doesn’t even know that she has it. I love how her innocence, what’s left of it anyways, will be the perfect bait. I was the first victim. All he desired was to steal my innocence. ‘Don’t stop baby, yeah baby, deeper’; all the while resisting the pain was torture in itself. She WILL give them to him. He will pay. Even though she is truly innocent; the lamb must suffer for the betterment of us all. DELIVER TO us, please lord, sweet vengeance. He needs to suffer, so that I may be at peace, even if it is at Mindy’s expense.”

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Vengeance(hidden message challenge)

    J.B. Williams' Buddy Icon J.B. Williams

    Posted 9 months ago

    The message is hidden too deep in there. However, read the context of the story, think about the story, and then try to find it.

  2. The Vengeance(hidden message challenge)

    BARomero's Buddy Icon BARomero

    Posted 9 months ago

    This one is really tough, but I’m working on it…

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