Can't You See [Hidden Message Challenge]

by Flute Loop<33

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Lust can end as quickly as it began.
Overrated stories hold our hopes up in the end.
Very funny how it all works, almost in a series.
Everything like a story, one chapter at a time.

Living all the time is harder then you know.
Intersting how no matter what you find a way through.
Fate has its part in every day, Don’t you think?
Everyone’s theroies of it all are different. Which one is true?

Anyways, back to the point.
Listen now. Can’t you see?
Wondering won’t do the trick.
Abort from the origional plan. Make up a new one.
Your still sitting here, go get something done.
Since you won’t be here forever.

Prequels

Write a prequel

Sequels

Write a sequel

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Can't You See [Hidden Message Challenge]

    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    well this is the second hidden message ficlet i have…. and i must say the second one was a little bit harder. anyway here it is, and your hint…. first letters… send a note if you think you have it.

  2. Can't You See [Hidden Message Challenge]

    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    haha whoops
    i clicked the wrong button and accidentally rated myself… haha whoops

  3. Can't You See [Hidden Message Challenge]

    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted 9 months ago

    This is a good one!

  4. Can't You See [Hidden Message Challenge]

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 9 months ago

    Wow! I love the first stanza, and this is probably the best acrostic I’ve ever read. I adore!
    LoA

  5. Can't You See [Hidden Message Challenge]

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 9 months ago

    Glad you at least rated yourself highly, and a lovely hidden message.

  6. Can't You See [Hidden Message Challenge]

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Why, THX , would you ever rate yourself poorly?
    ~
    Nice job. I think I like this hidden message better then your first one ;) Thanks for entering bffl!!

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