Conflicting Voices In My Head!!!!

by Dreamer

NO!
Maybe?
No!
perhaps?
No!
but what is he going to say?
Probably something stupid.
But what if he really does have a reason?
He doesn’t.
but what if he does?
think of what he did!
he was drunk…
exactly.
exactly.

Oh the conflicting voices of my head.
I looked at him, his eyes seemed genuine… but how could I trust anything he said?
“Make it quick,” I muttered.
His face brightened, “Really?”
I glared at him, “I didn’t say I’d forgive you, I said I would listen!”
“Oh, well, ok. Why don’t I take it from the beginning?”
“Is this long?”
“um, it kind of has to be”
“Great. Goodbye.”
“No please wait, I’ll try to make it fast.”
I turned back around.
“Well, go ahead!”
“Oh well, ok,” he stuck his hands in his pockets, thinking for a second, “January 1st, 2006. 12:01.”
A stared at him, confused.
“That was my first drink of alcohol.”
“Freshman year?”
“Yeah. It was at a party, we were celebrating the end of my first year in varsity soccer. All the guys were there…”

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Conflicting Voices In My Head!!!!

    Dragon_sun 515's Buddy Icon Dragon_sun 515

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love how he knows the exact day and time of his first drink. After being twisted to my way of thinking it makes it seem like he regrets it. Sequel!

  2. Conflicting Voices In My Head!!!!

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    Posted 7 months ago

    way to communicate her conflicting thoughts.

    can’t wait to see what blake’s story is….

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