Things the Dark is Good For

by THX 0477

He didn’t know how long he’d sat in the dark, but Renard knew it had been too long. But he’d realized a few things, as he often did. For instance, it was in the dark under their beach house that young Renard realized he wasn’t the reason the women came and went. It was because his dad always tried to juggle two, three, or four at once.

And hero or not, he’d promised to help. Sitting in a dark crevice of the basement was not helping. He made his way to the stairs, dodging obstacles in the dim light in his uncanny way. Still deep in thought he started up the stairs, so it should come as no surprise that he practically ran into Izzy as she was descending.

“Bonito? I…oh, you poor…” she started.

“No. Non. Nein,” Renard cut her off, “You doon’t haf to. I em a man. I shood not have run, but I em d-done.” He paused, let a tic pass, and gave his cheek a gentle slap. “I haf a tic. Thet’s why I do that.” She smiled understandingly, so he continued, “Come, there is much to do. I haf a plan.”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Things the Dark is Good For

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 5 months ago

    Okay, I know the accent is totally inconsistent, but just accept that it’s odd, and let’s move on. He has a plan. I’m not sure what it is yet, but he has one.

  2. Things the Dark is Good For

    Nouvelle Bardot's Buddy Icon Nouvelle Bardot

    Posted 5 months ago

    ooh such determination you have there thx, but a plan? what could possibly be going on in renard’s head? i fear that you may have to double sequel…
    loa!

  3. Things the Dark is Good For

    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    A plan! Woo hoo! You’re building lots of excitement, THX !

Want to comment on this ficlet? You need to sign in!