Meeting the Family

by Mistress Elsha Hawk

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The park provided many photo opportunities. I sent dozens of photos from my phone to her father. He texted back the go ahead to talk to the family.

I dressed in a business suit. This was business. I waited until they all were home, probably doing family things, homework, chores, etc. I almost felt guilt for the impact my news would have.

I walked up to the door, rang the bell, and introduced myself with an alias, a detective nobody with information for them. Harmless. For now.

I sat in their tasteful living room while they perused the various documents. I listened as they began to change their tone from innocence, to defensive, to outrage. I maintained my composure and calmly asked them for the girl. Of course, they refused. I excused myself and made a phone call from the hall.

“They are scared, boss. They must know they will lose her in a trial. They might flee, tonight. How should I proceed?”

“Watch them this evening, in the shadows, and intercept them if they leave. If not, get her. I WANT that girl!”

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  1. Meeting the Family

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    oh god! Wow…scary! Why does he want Devon…hmm…
    LoA

  2. Meeting the Family

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    whoa.

  3. Meeting the Family

    xxcatiexcatxx's Buddy Icon xxcatiexcatxx

    Posted 8 months ago

    oh please sequel!

  4. Meeting the Family

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    If that’s the father.. why’d he give her up in the first place??
    LoA

  5. Meeting the Family

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 8 months ago

    the father sounds mobish and undeserving of the girl. his creepy henchman is just that creepy. suspenseful.

  6. Meeting the Family

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 3 months ago

    i love a good henchman

  7. Meeting the Family

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 3 months ago

    i think the pc term is villianary support

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