You are mine, and mine alone

by leala1953

As I lay you down slowly

I can hear your breathing skip a beat for every motion
I make,

Your heartbeat, skipping as I first touch you soo softly…

As I whisper into your ear, to say “I love you”....
you turned and kiss me so tenderly and say ” you are mine, always and forever.”

You are mine
‘till the sun dies

you are mine…
‘till the end of time

You are mine
As october follows november!

you are mine..
and mine alone.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. You are mine, and mine alone

    leala1953's Buddy Icon leala1953

    Posted 4 months ago

    i have soo much love to give, and have given all i could, but everyday it fills back up again, this one is for you my special pet.

  2. You are mine, and mine alone

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    Lovely poem. Did you mean to be ironic, as November actually follows October, hinting at some underlying doubt in the relationship? Or perhaps a Freudian slip?
    LoA

  3. You are mine, and mine alone

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    awe! that is really sweet. I like it alot. =)
    LoA

  4. You are mine, and mine alone

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    romantic.. perfection… would love a love like that sigh..
    LoA

  5. You are mine, and mine alone

    leala1953's Buddy Icon leala1953

    Posted 4 months ago

    THX 0477 …and to all the readers don’t read to much into it. There’s nothing behind, nor underneath of it all. It’s a passion based on my emotion at that moment in time. You will have to ask my pet on the subject wether november (me), or october (october hollday) is following each other. As for me, I want him to follow me every waking moment of my life (internet) lol. Please don’t analized it gives me headaches. Thank you all.

  6. You are mine, and mine alone

    User 8828's Buddy Icon User 8828

    Posted 3 months ago

    thanks leala

  7. You are mine, and mine alone

    User 8828's Buddy Icon User 8828

    Posted 3 months ago

    thanks leala

  8. You are mine, and mine alone

    User 8900's Buddy Icon User 8900

    Posted 2 months ago

    only u and u alone

  9. You are mine, and mine alone

    User 8900's Buddy Icon User 8900

    Posted 2 months ago

    It’s me oct
    I luv u

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