Won't go round

by I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!

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Blackness,
blackness,
but a light has shone.
The light I see is you,
you are the light in my darkest world.
Every time I’m stuck you seem to be reaching out your hand.
It’s like I am the moon and you are the stars, You are the gravity and I’m the fall. Without you the fall does not have gravity and the moon does’nt have the stars. Without you my dear the world won’t go round.

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  1. Won't go round

    vampierella's Buddy Icon vampierella

    Posted 7 months ago

    I think it should be ‘reaching out YOUR hand’ but I can be wrong. Also I would enter a few times more in the last paragraph other that Nicely done.

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