Miracles

by Officially

My mother and my father shared happy looks, nodding enthusiastically.

“We know that it may be hard for you,” my mom began, smiling nervously at me, eager for my approval, “but we hope that you’ll be ok with it. You’re a good girl, we know.”

It was a question, I knew, one to see how I felt, and I couldn’t crush the happy glow in my mom.

I knew that at one point my mom had wanted a huge family. They thought that maybe that wouldn’t happen, when they tried for a while to have a baby without sucess.

I had been their miracle. Now, it seemed, they had another, and I couldn’t ruin that.

I wasn’t sure how I felt about being a big sister at this age (and with my mother’s age!), but I smiled back.

“That’s great, Mom. That’s really great.”

My parents looked relieved for a moment, and then simply smiled goofy smiles at each other and me.

“So, um, why don’t we eat?”

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  1. Miracles

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    Nice out at the end, trying to move past the uncomfortable situation of being witness to two people lost in their giddiness. Very real human emotion type stuff in there.
    LoA

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    Dr. Mousse's Buddy Icon Dr. Mousse

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Really good. Basically the same as THX 0477 .
    LoA

  3. Miracles

    RunningWithScissors' Buddy Icon RunningWithScissors

    Posted 4 months ago

    :] lovely twist.
    im glad to see you’ve continued with these.
    one of my very favorite series. :]

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    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    scary!!!

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    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    MORE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please.

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    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Sequel if you please :) FANTASTIC !

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