Fin

by Never Explain

It was about midday, and I just walked on. I stopped and found a bench near a bus stop. I sat on it and just let my mind go blank.
All of the -sudden, I felt a bulge in my pocket. I put my hand in and pulled out a pencil an a small pad of paper. Acting on impulse, I wrote.
You do now
Exactly what I wrote down forever ago, and handed to Ashley. Forever ago..
I realized that I heard crying near me. I looked over about a block away I saw a girl, about my age, crying into her cell phone.
I looked from her, to the note, and back. Right then I got up and ran to her.
I was feet away now and stopped.
“Why can’t I have someone who listens to me!!” She cried. “You don’t!!”
I stayed silent, and handed her the note.
She read it, and closed her phone.
“Really?” She said.
“Lets get a coffee or something. My Name’s Tom.” I said, holding out a hand.
“My name’s Denise” She said and grabbed my hand and we both walked on into the California sunlight.
Maybe, Denise. Maybe I thought as a smiled crossed my face.

The End

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    THE END !! omg! what a good ending! I wonder what the note said…What an awesome series!

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    Dr. Mousse's Buddy Icon Dr. Mousse

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    To Blusparrow, the note said You do now. What Tom wrote to Ashely “forever ago”. To the writers of this series, amazing job! I’ve been a fan of this series for quite some time and this is a great ending! True, I’m not a fan of cliffhanger endings, but this is definately an exeption. Well, now that I’ve just typed the world’s longest comment….
    LoA

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    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    woohoo! awesome series ending! luved it. Yes, awesome clifthanger ending :)
    LoA

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    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    btw, love the title!

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    RunningWithScissors' Buddy Icon RunningWithScissors

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    :] woot for an open road.
    live life wild tom!

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