Do you remember... (butterflygirl6106's 200th Ficlet Challenge)

by Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

Do you remember that girl?

“What girl?”

The one you were interested in at Abby Junior.

“Again, what girl at Abby Junior? I was interested in a lot of girls in high school.”

The one from your grade 8 cooking class.

groan “Could you be more specific? I was the only guy in the class!”

You know the one I’m talking about. The pretty one.

“Okay, look this is getting tiresome. Which pretty one?”

Lisa.

“Oooohhh. Lisa. Yeah, I remember her. Why?”

You had a huge crush on her.

We had a huge crush. Remember, you’re me.”

Okay. And that brings me to my main point.

“There’s a point to all this?”

Yes.

“Will you be getting to it some time today?”

Not if you’re going to be rude about it.

“Okay. I’m sorry. Please, enlighten me.”

That’s better. I was just wondering, why didn’t you ask her out?

“Well, 1) I was terminally shy in junior high, and 2) she was dating someone.”

Oh. I just figured you didn’t think she’d date someone who talks to himself. So, what you think about this?

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Do you remember... (butterflygirl6106's 200th Ficlet Challenge)

    Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)'s Buddy Icon Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

    Posted 7 months ago

    A conversation with myself (that I may or may not have actually had at some point) somewhat inspired by the back and forth between Michael Knight and KITT in Knight Rider (which I’ve been watching way too much of lately). :)

  2. Do you remember... (butterflygirl6106's 200th Ficlet Challenge)

    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Hilarious. I love the, “Oh. I just figured you didn’t think she’d date someone who talks to himself.” (I enjoyed the KITT reference. If only I could keep the theme from playing in my head. :/)
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    I think it is funny how we all seem to argue with ourselves. At least we work out our problems before they “spill over.”

  3. Do you remember... (butterflygirl6106's 200th Ficlet Challenge)

    butterflygirl6106's Buddy Icon butterflygirl6106

    Posted 7 months ago

    Very funny, I love the way the other acted as if he could not recall the the crush.

  4. Do you remember... (butterflygirl6106's 200th Ficlet Challenge)

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Funny dialogue with oneself.. annoying oneslef with questions that the anwers must already be known. I laughed out loud.
    LoA

  5. Do you remember... (butterflygirl6106's 200th Ficlet Challenge)

    Freedom :]'s Buddy Icon Freedom :]

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very funny and well written.
    LoA

  6. Do you remember... (butterflygirl6106's 200th Ficlet Challenge)

    Freedom :]'s Buddy Icon Freedom :]

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very funny and well written.
    LoA

  7. Do you remember... (butterflygirl6106's 200th Ficlet Challenge)

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 6 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    It is rather frustrating when your inner voice is playing games with you.

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