Senses on Fire

by Never Explain

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This is amazing. My senses were on fire. Even though I couldn’t see anything, but the sounds were beautiful. The light breeze tickled my hair, sending excited shivers down my back. It was so quiet, I think I could hear Hayley’s soft breathing. I wanted to stay like this for as long as possible.
“It’s beautiful out tonight.” I said, staring out at the nonexistent stars.
“Yeah,” She said. “this is a nice spot you picked out.”
“I go to it all the time.” I lied. “You look awesome.”
It wasn’t exactly a lie, because she probably does look good. Maybe it’s just her voice. I don’t really care since I’m never going to get my sight back, it doesn’t matter at all. As long as it’s just us right now
I turned over to her.
I have to tell her.
“Hayley.” I said.
“Hmm?” She said, I heard her turn towards me.
I slowly took off my sunglasses.
I heard Hayley gasp.
“Tyler!” She exclaimed. “Are you-”
“Yes, I’m blind.”

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  1. Senses on Fire

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    A lie and then the truth? Interesting. Can’t wait to see how she reacts!!
    LoA

  2. Senses on Fire

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    A lie and then the truth? Interesting. Can’t wait to see how she reacts!!
    LoA

  3. Senses on Fire

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like how you describe that he can still feel and sense everything, even though he’s blind.

  4. Senses on Fire

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    LoA…yeah I keep forgetting that.^^

  5. Senses on Fire

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like it! He finally told the truth! Go tyler!

  6. Senses on Fire

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 5 months ago

    i like how he uses his other senses to make a conection with haley.. one can hope that Haley still likes him.

  7. Senses on Fire

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    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ahhh!! Can’t wait to see what shes going to say!

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