Something in my mind

by User 8133

There is something in my mind, all my life, all m life I’ve been searching for something…a great price, a light at the end of the tunnel. My life, one mistake? My future, one never ending battle? My ultimate challenge, one big shot, and I’m the shooter!

There is something in my mind, something evil, it isn’t so bad as it seems, but it keeps me away, away from the people, away from any danger. No voices please, no public, no trial, no witnesses, no defence.

There is something in my mind, I want to show the world who I am, what I am…The ultimate question, when will I arrive at my final destination? Buildings are rising up to the sky, over the rainbow, if I want to walk on them, what am I supposed to do, help me, somebody, nobody.

There is something in my hand, matches, gasoline matches, one house, one fire, one disaster…me, at the end of the world! The buildings are shouting at me, I’m walking to one of them, 5 stages high, almost there, sensation!!

Everything seems nice inside, for a moment..

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Something in my mind

    Blossom Ruoqen's Buddy Icon Blossom Ruoqen

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    this has a really nice poetic flow to it. I really like it. and may I suggest, in the second paragraph, “There is something in my head, something evil, it isn’t so bad as it seems..”, changing ‘so’ to ‘as’ , or changing ‘it isn’t’ to ‘it’s not’. I think it might give it a better flow

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