Sister Dearest: Lovely Lora (I miss you)

by Blossom Ruoqen

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My dearest darling, sister sweet, I swear one day, one day we’ll meet. I glance towards the clouds, these clouds of grey, and I swear to you lovely, forever I’ll pray. It was too soon to say goodbye, I never expected you to die.

My dearest darling, sister serene, I miss you so much, life’s like a ravine. I keep falling down, you’d pick me back up, but now that you’re gone, I miss you so much. You were my flight, but now I’m falling so fast, my wings of love ripped from my back.

Oh lovely Lora, you meant so much, to everyone close enough to touch. And even then, you reached out farther, to help along some stranger’s daughter. A foggy day, a ponderous truck, no one knew where you were, we miss you so much.

My wondrous dear, dearest wonder, I swear one day, we’ll dance in the thunder. Voices of rain, lighting brightens the sky, they all call your name, as i shriek ‘baby don’t die!’ Although I’ve lost my wings, others still proudly wear them, they bear me up softly, so I fly once again.

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  1. Sister Dearest: Lovely Lora (I miss you)

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That is so sad! I am very sorry for your loss! She is looking proudly down at you!

  2. Sister Dearest: Lovely Lora (I miss you)

    Adam Croft's Buddy Icon Adam Croft

    Posted 4 months ago

    Wow. A powerful piece, full of emotion. She would be proud.

  3. Sister Dearest: Lovely Lora (I miss you)

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    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow. No more words. Just wow.

  4. Sister Dearest: Lovely Lora (I miss you)

    Brebelles' Buddy Icon Brebelles

    Posted 4 months ago

    This is beautiful. Gorgeous. Lorie WOULD be proud. She was proud of you, I know this to be true, in my heart of hearts. I’m proud of you, for so many things.

  5. Sister Dearest: Lovely Lora (I miss you)

    Brebelles' Buddy Icon Brebelles

    Posted 4 months ago

    Oh, and you made me tear up a little with this. (Something, I rarely do…)

    My Mom- Honey this is truly beautiful. How I wish I could bear your pain and help you cope.

  6. Sister Dearest: Lovely Lora (I miss you)

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    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is moving… simply gorgeous. It says so much.
    LoA

  7. Sister Dearest: Lovely Lora (I miss you)

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    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is soo goregeous. I feel your pain through this poem but i want you to keep your chin up. luv ya

  8. Sister Dearest: Lovely Lora (I miss you)

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    Posted about 1 month ago

    Lovely. ♥

  9. Sister Dearest: Lovely Lora (I miss you)

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    Posted 22 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Beautiful. She’d be proud.

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