i miss you

by lilly

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I miss your hug,
I miss your smile,
I miss your laugh,
I miss you.

I miss the memories we had,
I miss the laughs that we shared,
I miss the time that we spent together,
I miss you.

I wish you were here,
I wish I could see your smile,
I wish I could hear your laugh again,
I wish you could hold me again.

Why did you have to go?
Why did things have to end this way?
Why did he have to ruin it?
Because of him things will never be the same.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. i miss you

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    Touching ode to someone you miss, and with a bit of a surprise angry ending too. I liked that little twist on the mournful ode. This would have been a lovely entry to catie cat’s challenge—http://ficlets.com/stories/23260

  2. i miss you

    -Deleted-'s Buddy Icon -Deleted-

    Posted 6 months ago

    Wow Hailey. I belive this “him” is me. Am I correct? && I didn’t ruin it, you did. You ruined it by talking behind Cassie’s back and I just was being a good friend by telling her so I did not ruin anything. I don’t know what is making you think you didn’t say any of this but, deep down, you know you did.

  3. i miss you

    ♥Bridget's Buddy Icon ♥Bridget

    Posted 6 months ago

    Dont write about me any more!!!! I hate you!!!!ALOT!!!!!!!!!!! So get out of my life!!!! I cant stand you!!! Casey Likes you….JKG and Joe hates you.

  4. i miss you

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 6 months ago

    ok look this is not about either one of you. its about someone else. i would tell you but thats not your buissness.

  5. i miss you

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 6 months ago

    because cassie did you ever hold me? i think not

  6. i miss you

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 6 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I enjoyed it. One question did you mean to write, “I missed the memoried we had?”

  7. i miss you

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 6 months ago

    oh yah i did

  8. i miss you

    Russell bassett's Buddy Icon Russell bassett

    Posted 6 months ago

    Sorry about everything!

  9. i miss you

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 6 months ago

    its ok. dude dont flip

  10. i miss you

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 6 months ago

    hey who is this about? Can you note me and tell me?

  11. i miss you

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 5 months ago

    ill tell you if you can guess.

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