Lucky or Good?

by Taffaz

Alcar stood in a clearing, a gentle sloping hill surrounded by trees, Oaks, Birch and a single Willow tree standing alone. Under the Willow was a fresh grave, he knew he’d been foolish to come here but this is where she’d wanted to be buried. He was surrounded by ten of the Kings best fighters, all stood ready to strike at his first sign of weakness. Some called him the best swordsman in the land, others the luckiest. All Alcar knew is that if he was to survive, he’d have to be both.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Lucky or Good?

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I look forward to seeing how Alcar fairs against the kings men. I’m also wondering who she is and why she’d want to be buried in such a dangerous place.

  2. Lucky or Good?

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 3 months ago

    great premise to a medeival tale.

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