Tortured soul

by horrorfan13

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Do you see me? Truly see me? If you dare to look into my eyes, you will see my tortured soul. You will see how my life has led me to this: This room, these clothes, this hat. Such a sad, sad existence. If you dare, you will see it all. How I ended up here, with this man as my salvation. How I must forever dwell in the land of men, but never truly be known. Left to wallow in utter obscurity in this god-forsaken room. If you dare, look into my beady little eyes and see the face of pain and torture.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Tortured soul

    Dani H. Mefel's Buddy Icon Dani H. Mefel

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    I like it, it sounds eerie but flows and I love eerie. It sounds good and by the looks of it maybe writing could be your thing, I’m still deciding well then again I’m still young. Maybe you’d wanna read some of my stuff and see if writing is my thing. Look up Hospital Bed, if you want.

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    MissJonas1492's Buddy Icon MissJonas1492

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    WOW .! THIS ONE IS TOTALLY GREAT ! I LOVE THE FIRST TWO LINES ! THEY R AWESOME ! KEEO UP THE GREAT WORK !

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    Dangerous Angels' Buddy Icon Dangerous Angels

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    “You will see how my life has led me to this: This room, these clothes, this hat. Such a sad, sad existence.”

    I really like this part. The 1st time I read it I read it as if his existence is sad, because he had a bad fashion sense, so it mad me laugh.

    But job well done, keep up the good work. lol

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    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, utterly, eerily beautiful. Lovely in a slightly twisted way.

  5. Tortured soul

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, utterly, eerily beautiful. Lovely in a slightly twisted way.

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