It Starts With Sorry

by Dani H. Mefel

When we met that’s what I said
I held your eyes with my eyes for just a moment
Then I looked away
Too soon
I’m sorry
Is that how its supposed to start?
Isn’t that the way it ended?
Did it end?
Are we still in the beginning?
I’m so disoriented
I’m sorry
You should be too
I wished you loved me like I loved you
Then wishes don’t come true
I’ m sorry
That’s how I start my day
Especially with you
I tell the world I’m sorry
There is no me and you
Is that my fault?
If it is
I’m sorry for that too
I’m sorry you see me like this
I’ m sorry I’m like this
I’m sorry that we fell
But we should have realized that we were falling apart not falling in love
My world never did go on forever
It was never filled with blue skies or green trees
My world was of doors that needed keys and air that makes you wheeze
How was yours before I interrupted so
Was it full of beaches and sand
I’m sorry
Were you at the wrath of hearts command
Forgive me and my words
Let’s all start over
Hello,
I’ m sorry

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

  1. It Starts With Sorry

    SJHundak/S.J.Willing's Buddy Icon SJHundak/S.J.Willing

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    nice. Catchy. A few to many sorry’s for me but otherwise very cool

    S.J.

  2. It Starts With Sorry

    horrorfan13's Buddy Icon horrorfan13

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I LIKE THIS TOO . SAD , SAD LOVE SONG .

  3. It Starts With Sorry

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    I like this one.Some of it doesnt really make sense to me but it prolly does 2 every one else.

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