Snow Devil

by THX 0477

We all flopped back into the billowy snow with a welcoming whoomp. After dragging our arms and legs through the thick, white medium we three revelers struggled to our feet amid giggles and chortles of glee. Dusting ourselves off we turned to examine our art.

Dillan cocked his head to one side examining mine, “How did you do that?” We all looked. I couldn’t explain.

“It’s cool,” Gary added, “But I don’t see how you made it look like a tail.”

“I didn’t,” I said firmly, “I just flopped and waved!”

“Are those horns?” Dillan asked in a dawning sense of concern.

“Couldn’t be,” I scoffed. A wind whipped up and seemed to mock my protestation.

“They are,” Gary said almost in awe, then, “Dude, you made a snow devil!”

“Did not! It’s just a really bad snow angel.” I was starting to worry.

Dillan blinked a few times, scratched his head through his beanie, and asked in all seriousness, “What does your dad do again?”

I kind of figured now was a bad time to mention I was adopted. Yeah, bad time.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Snow Devil

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 7 months ago

    Supernatural. Funny take on the snow angel..
    LoA

  2. Snow Devil

    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    oh this was cool, it kept me intrigued the how time

  3. Snow Devil

    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    whole** oops lol

  4. Snow Devil

    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great title, THX !! Great hook and lots of directions you could go with the story at this point – especially with the ending. Nicely done!

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    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Cool story! Nice twist on a snowy day classic.

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    leala1953's Buddy Icon leala1953

    Posted 7 months ago

    I love this one….sequels please. anybody.

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