my home

by lady e

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a sweet little
neat little
treat of a home
so quaint and upholding
but just barely my own.

it stays sweet
quite neat
and a nice tiny treat
only if i pay rent
to my landlord named pete.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. my home

    //miss mia//'s Buddy Icon //miss mia//

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    This was really good, it’s one of those sweet home little stories, that make you feel bubbly.

  2. my home

    MissJonas1492's Buddy Icon MissJonas1492

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    yeah its good. i like the rhyming in it. the landlord pete makes it funny. write some more! :)

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