Yech, great description and nice job keeping up the slime factor on the torturer. Wow, can’t believe I spelled that right. Go figure. Great continuation. You routinely write with skill beyond your years.
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Woah, very descriptive. Tis inspires me.

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This is really wrenching. You can practically feel his pain. Very very well written.
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I like the opening alliteration of the flowers. well put. and the suspenseful end of what’s to come. and i agree 100% with ThX about your talent,surpasses us all.
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Gross, gross, gross overstatement, Kermitgorf. Even if I’m good for my age, I am certainly not better than many of the writers here. There are plenty I could name that write more descriptively, more emotionally, more professionally, anything. Even if I’m good, I’m not the best.

Stovo, I don’t believe we are talking about the same Stovo. Your story is outstanding. Your talent is amazing, far better than mine. Don’t ever doubt it.
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words bubbling out of slimy lips like eels.
very good…
Stovohobo is right. I AM THE BEST !!!
but seriously, very good

i like my story characters shirtless!