Joy Ride

by Apostrophe

Dane and her boyfriend Chester leave the movie theatre. Chester treated her to a movie to celebrate her birthday. They were in the car heading home.. or so Dane thought. She didn’t say anything right away, thinking that Chester had planned on taking a trip to the store first. When they left the town limits she became curious. She didnt say much.. trying to figgure out where they were headed. Soon they reached the border for West Virginia.. “Umm.. were headed twoards West Virginia..” She said, stating the obvious.. “Yeah I know..were goin for a lil drive.” Chester admitted. Before long they reached a senic overlook.. He pulled the car over and instructed her to get out. She did unaware of what he was up to.

He met her on the passenger side.. and looked at her. He put his hands on her shivvering shoulders. “I wanted to tell you that I love you. Will you make me the luckiest man on earth and marry me?” He said, looking into her dark brown eyes. She let out a startled shriek.. “Yes” She said.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Joy Ride

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    ok that was sweet. in car by the roadside. its not clicheish over dinner in a restaurant down on one knee.

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    sfost93's Buddy Icon sfost93

    Posted 7 months ago

    awwwww,that is so cute,but i thought he was going to murder her.my bad.i feel stupied :(

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    J.B. Williams' Buddy Icon J.B. Williams

    Posted 7 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I thought so too. I thought that was the end of that woman.

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    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Beautiful.

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