Awesome

by Strait Jacket Child

Angel wings, and Demon tails
White hot stars, and Dragon scales
Epitome of Mystery.
Shining glittering memory
Open meaning glowing bright
Magical powers
Extraordinary Light.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Awesome

    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    There’s something very mystical about this. It’s a very pretty, rather haunting poem, with an almost musical rhythm. I really enjoyed it! I guess there’s only one world for it….Awesome!
    LoA

  2. Awesome

    heartbeats echocho's Buddy Icon heartbeats echocho

    Posted 2 months ago

    oo love this! it’s short yet there’s so much in the words…
    yes indeed, emma! It is quite awesome…
    LoA

  3. Awesome

    Strait Jacket Child's Buddy Icon Strait Jacket Child

    Posted 2 months ago

    ....Did anyone read downwards? (It’s an accrostic =O)

  4. Awesome

    Strait Jacket Child's Buddy Icon Strait Jacket Child

    Posted 2 months ago

    And thank you, both of you…. (I need and edit button D: )

  5. Awesome

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    that is so cool! up to down it is a poem and down to up it is kind a story! AWESOMEEEE !
    LoA

  6. Awesome

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That was great, even without the accrostic aspect I thought it was a nice, poetic job of evoking the freedom and release of fantasy. Thanks for being awesome!
    LoA

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