Door Bell Ring (New School)

by butterflygirl6106

The guy was on the other side of the street watching her go back into the store.

“Sir, I left my book bag on the counter have you seen it?”

“Yeah, the guy you were talking to said he knew you so I asked him to return it to you.”

“No, I don’t know him, why did you do that!”

“I am sure he will bring it to you, don’t worry he is proberly driving to your house now with it.”

Little did she know he was across the street watching everything. Jenna crossed her arms and started for home.

She knew at that moment she was being stalked. She turned the last cornner to reach her house when she noticed a slight shadow of a car driving very slow on the hedges.

She pick up the pace and ran to her front porch. She ran in the house and up the stairs to her room and shut the door.

Her mother had not gotten back from the trian station picking up her grand mother.

It was only a few seconds that she was in the house when she heard the door bell ring.

She thought that maybe her mom left her keys in..

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Door Bell Ring (New School)

    paper flowers' Buddy Icon paper flowers

    Posted 4 months ago

    Who’s at the door? This keeps getting better and better! One thing: proberly should be probably
    LoA

  2. Door Bell Ring (New School)

    Disturbed Youth's Buddy Icon Disturbed Youth

    Posted 4 months ago

    i really dont like that guy!

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  3. Door Bell Ring (New School)

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 4 months ago

    Very suspenseful series.

  4. Door Bell Ring (New School)

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    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This one has really caught my attention. I love the way you’re starting each sequel with the final words of the story before it. Really maintains the flow of the narrative. Looking forward to more!

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