A Small Miracle

by Storykeeper of Fae

This had gone one for days when a pair of children came by. The pair consisted of an older boy, perhaps thirteen, and a younger girl, his sister, six years old.

They asked her the predictable questions. “What are you doing?”

“My part in bringing about world peace.”

The little girl said, “Why are you out here all alone?”

Karen looked into the child’s eyes. “Because no one has bothered to join me.”

The girl’s eyes grew sad. “You must be lonely.”

“Everyone is lonely. People don’t care. That’s why I’m here.”

Then, the little girl did a miraculous thing. She wrapped her short little arms around Karen’s waist. The young woman was caught off-guard. She let the tension out of her shoulders, dropped her sign, and wrapped her arms around the little girl.

The boy then said. “I brought her here to show you. You sure no one cares?” He then pulled out of his backpack two signs much like her own, and a trio of peanut butter and jelly sandwiches. “Now. We have a world to bring peace to.”

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  1. A Small Miracle

    [pens&feathers]'s Buddy Icon [pens&feathers]

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love it. Fabulous continuation. And I love how you show that it takes the innocence of children to combat the callousness in the world.

  2. A Small Miracle

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 7 months ago

    Cute, though with an air of inevitable tragedy perhaps. Or maybe that’s just me.
    LoA

  3. A Small Miracle

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    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice sequel, it captured the charm of the original and I agree with pens’ statement about innocence.

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    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh, so touching how can anyone ignore this message when you have children doing what adults should be doing. Thanks I love it.

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