Wallace is back on the Program

by Trying to Blend

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Wallace is back on the Program

    Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)'s Buddy Icon Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very, very interesting. I like where you’re going with this.
    “The nurse smelled like rosewater. He hadn’t smelled that since Nana, so many years ago.” I love that image.

  2. Wallace is back on the Program

    Trying to Blend's Buddy Icon Trying to Blend

    Posted 6 months ago

    squeals Thanks!
    Your turn…How bad IS this place? lol

  3. Wallace is back on the Program

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    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like the suspense buildup. “His neighbors were within days of realizing they had a monster among their midst.” Unleash the monster! (at the appropriate time, of course).

  4. Wallace is back on the Program

    hyperbolation's Buddy Icon hyperbolation

    Posted 5 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    i like this a lot – good (and believable) internal monologue.

    my only criticism: maybe you should’ve ended with “His feet went first.” – would’ve been more in keeping with the tone, i think.

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