That Road

by Luuvvxiz_90

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Down a long and winding pathway
I want to walk
Go far away.
So far my only friends are trees
thier lovely leaves
swaying in the breeze.
I relax and let things go
where this path leads
i do not know.
But i know one thing is for sure
it’s that your not here
so everything is pure.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. That Road

    Luuvvxiz_90's Buddy Icon Luuvvxiz_90

    Posted 6 months ago

    I’ve been on a ‘paths that lead to somewhere unknown’ kick. hope you like it.

  2. That Road

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    Ouch, such a lovely poem with such a stinging message to it. Did you mean ‘you’re’ instead of ‘your’, by chance?

  3. That Road

    Brebelles' Buddy Icon Brebelles

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I can tell that your are on a ‘path that to somewhere unknown’. And I lurved it!

  4. That Road

    Luuvvxiz_90's Buddy Icon Luuvvxiz_90

    Posted 6 months ago

    yes i did mean you’re. thanx for pointing that out. i love that ppl r checking out my stuff!

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