Under With You

by Luuvvxiz_90

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Wash up on my shore and save me
take me under with you.
The sun has dried me out
and i need to go under with you.
Walk in the shifting sand
then take me under with you.
On to another watery bed
I will go under with you.
You send the waves that bring me joy
Far under I’ll go with you.
Our names in sand will be gone
us too when i go under with you.
Seeing your face gives me life
when i go under with you.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Under With You

    Luuvvxiz_90's Buddy Icon Luuvvxiz_90

    Posted 5 months ago

    I really like this poem. I havent written one that i like in it’s entirety in a long time. hope you like it too.

  2. Under With You

    Brebelles' Buddy Icon Brebelles

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    liked it?? Loved it, is more like it. you need to do more like this. Its like, so passionate. Brava!!!!!!!!!!!

  3. Under With You

    Brebelles' Buddy Icon Brebelles

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Brebelles mom here:

    Impressive. You go girl, knock our socks off. So proud of you.

    Madre’ #2

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