Do you know whats best for you?

by sfost93

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I thought it was a yes but turned out a no,
I thought it there wasn’t love cause it didn’t show.
You said it was true,
when you i said “i love you”.
Then give me proof,
or i am poof.
I can’t take this anymore,
you walking in and out the door.
Then when you come you don’t smell the same,
I don’t want to play this game.
So i now own this house,
now go and get out.
Don’t come near,
cause i now fear.
You might say something that would make me come back,
and i don’t want that.
So if you know whats best for you,you would let me be,
and let me be me.

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  1. Do you know whats best for you?

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    Nice, defiant and definitive message with a touch of very human self doubt. A few flubbed or out of place words here and there.
    LoA

  2. Do you know whats best for you?

    sfost93's Buddy Icon sfost93

    Posted 4 months ago

    Thank you!

  3. Do you know whats best for you?

    xxcatiexcatxx's Buddy Icon xxcatiexcatxx

    Posted 4 months ago

    Ive felt like this more than once… you write very good poems! I love them! :3
    kAT
    LoA

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