In Sanity, Or Insanity

by Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

They just stand there, staring at me. Oh, my god, I think. This is not happening. This is not happening!

I walk over, as close as I dare to get, trying to tell myself this was all a dream. No, a nightmare. But there he is. And he is dead. It looks like I shot him right through the heart. Did he feel anything, I wonder?

I look at them, staring at me. One of them flies over and lands on my shoulder. It looks at me, it’s eye so close to mine that it’s all I can see.

We tried to warn you. What the…

“Did you…” I can’t ask the question, because I don’t want to know. I really, truly don’t want to know.

Did we… talk to you? A low, croaking sound escapes its partially open beak. I think it’s laughing at me.

Do ravens laugh?

No. No, no, this isn’t happening. If I keep telling myself that, maybe it’ll be true.

Am I losing my mind? I must be. Ravens don’t follow sane people. They don’t talk to sane people, and they certainly don’t laugh at them.

And sane people don’t kill other people. Do they?

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. In Sanity, Or Insanity

    Russell Ruffino's Buddy Icon Russell Ruffino

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like it. It gets across the descent into madness that I wanted to put in but didn’t have the space.

  2. In Sanity, Or Insanity

    Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)'s Buddy Icon Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

    Posted 3 months ago

    Cool! Glad I was able to do justice to your awesome beginning.

  3. In Sanity, Or Insanity

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This reminds me of Poe with a super-natural-talking-animal twist!

    LoA

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