A Good Way To Wake Up

by Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

The first thing I was aware of was the pain. I opened my eyes enough to realize I was in a hospital. But the lights were so bright, it was like someone driving a railroad spike through my eyes.

“Ah, you’re awake,” a young woman said. “Welcome back to the land of the living.”

“How long…” I asked.

“Couple of hours. You passed out at the club. A few people thought you’d drank too much, but I don’t know anyone who passes out after one Long Island.”

“Yeah, I’m not exactly a cheap…” I stopped. “How did you know what I had?”

A little laugh. “Because I’d been watching you since you came in.”

I opened my eyes. The light was bearable now. I looked at the nurse.

It was her!

“What…”

“I saw you fall, and ran over to help. You hit your head pretty hard. I knew where they would take you, so I decided to put in a little overtime.”

“Takes some pressure off my co-workers, and,” she whispered, “I have a captive audience to tell you just how handsome you are.” She kissed my cheek.

Her lips were very, very soft.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. A Good Way To Wake Up

    butterflygirl6106's Buddy Icon butterflygirl6106

    Posted 5 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Ok is this a I knew you were the one type of story if so fate is the key!

  2. A Good Way To Wake Up

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 5 months ago

    Aaw!

    He got the girl!

    I wonder why things like that don’t happen to me…

  3. A Good Way To Wake Up

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Yes!!!!!

  4. A Good Way To Wake Up

    Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)'s Buddy Icon Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

    Posted 5 months ago

    I actually had this story in mind when I first saw the inspiring picture, but I decided to show how he got there in the first place. Glad you liked it. :D

  5. A Good Way To Wake Up

    Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)'s Buddy Icon Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

    Posted 5 months ago

    And, in case anyone’s wondering, yes, I’m a firm believer in love at first sight.

  6. A Good Way To Wake Up

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great continuation from a story inspired by a great picture. Such a surprising twist, too, to have this girl be a nurse. And quite handy for our hero, too. I wonder if she gave him mouth to mouth resuscitation? :p
    LoA

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