Please, Eve

by thebetweenspace

Please, Eve come and tempt me
In the garden of my mind.
I’m alive for you.
Obsession dripping,
Pumping through my veins,
I’m a lie for you.

Red apple lust,
Passion, pleasure bending,
Heart and soul,
I’m alive for you.
Forbidden treasure,
Enticing eyes,
Break my heart again.
I’m a lie for you.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Please, Eve

    butterflygirl6106's Buddy Icon butterflygirl6106

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great monotone of the devil inticing eve.

  2. Please, Eve

    Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)'s Buddy Icon Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow! That was just fabulous. I really enjoyed that one. I love your poetry. Keep it up!

  3. Please, Eve

    heartbeats echocho's Buddy Icon heartbeats echocho

    Posted 3 months ago

    yes indeed. this is teriffic!
    great how this was writen from the devils perspective…
    i love your poetry as well. :]-
    LoA

  4. Please, Eve

    Music-Hearted's Buddy Icon Music-Hearted

    Posted 3 months ago

    I’m really impressed. Great poetry!

  5. Please, Eve

    KasumiRose's Buddy Icon KasumiRose

    Posted 3 months ago

    Yeah this is really sensual. I love it

  6. Please, Eve

    I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!'s Buddy Icon I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!

    Posted 2 months ago

    I LOVE IT SO ,GREAT JOB .

  7. Please, Eve

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    How did I miss this?! It’s gorgeous. Sinful, even.

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