A Time For Rest

by BlueStocking

Night had fallen upon the small kumpania as they finally set up their camp for the next week or so. Ion watched the fire for a while and let his muscles relax against the ground. They had been traveling for days before they caught sight of another town and he was glad they could settle down for a while. He sat up and ran a hand through his black curls and sighed as they fell back into his brown eyes. He pulled a piece of leather from his pocket and used it to tie his hair back, though a few shorter, unruly curls stayed around his eyes and he puffed a breath at them to move them. It didn’t work. The scent of meat and potatoes floated on the air as a group of women bustled around preparing dinner. Ion’s stomach growled and he stood, stretching his arms over his head for a moment. A warm breeze touched the bare skin of his open shirt and ruffled the ends of the bright sash that was now falling from his waist. He tied it again, firelight dancing across the mirrors sewn into it to ward off the Evil Eye.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. A Time For Rest

    atllta's Buddy Icon atllta

    Posted 8 months ago

    I like the descriptiveness in this story, you can almost feel what Ion looks like.

    I would suggest a bit of structure in what you write, adding a line break or two, so that the reader doesn’t have to look at one large block of text.

    Otherwise, great!

  2. A Time For Rest

    BlueStocking's Buddy Icon BlueStocking

    Posted 8 months ago

    There were line breaks…but then I went over the character limit, LOL .

  3. A Time For Rest

    Juni Lyn's Buddy Icon Juni Lyn

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    another good!

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    BlueStocking's Buddy Icon BlueStocking

    Posted 8 months ago

    d’aww, thanks :D

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