Overactive Imagination

by One Time, One Chance

I didn’t know what to say. My imagination went into effect as I fantasized our conversation.

(Scene: Hayden hanging on the ledge of Mel’s window, and as he taps a few times she comes out wearing a tight, rose red cami with LOVE written across it in studs which made her look incredibley skinny, and shorts only barely covering her butt, which also wasn’t abnormally big. Her hair is shining beautifully in the moonlight as she stares down at Hayden, whose hair was thrown about in a certain way that’d make an ice cube melt on the spot.)

Hayden: Oh Mel, I dated Anna only to make you jealous! For you, my love burns with the white hot intensity of a thousand suns!
Mel: (hair whisps across her face as a slow wind picks up) Oh Hayden, I couldn’t! How am I to believe any of which you speak?
Hayden: (tear forms in eye) Mel, I must go, but I will remain in your heart, as will you in mine. Goodbye, my love!

CURTAIN .

Comments

  1. Overactive Imagination

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 7 months ago

    white hot intensity of 1000 suns.. now thats LOVE

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    butterflygirl6106's Buddy Icon butterflygirl6106

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great dialog.

  3. Overactive Imagination

    Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)'s Buddy Icon Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

    Posted 7 months ago

    Anyone else ever have this happen? :D I think 90% of the conversations I had with girls in high school were like this – overly dramatic and totally in my head!
    Great job.

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    LeAnn717's Buddy Icon LeAnn717

    Posted 7 months ago

    Ummm i think you may have sequeled the wrong storyline, good piece though.

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    Never Explain's Buddy Icon Never Explain

    Posted 7 months ago

    you sequelled the wrong piece :)

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    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted 7 months ago

    where’s Mel and Hayden?

  7. Overactive Imagination

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 6 months ago

    wait..wait what?

  8. Overactive Imagination

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 6 months ago

    OH SNAP
    hahahahahhahhahahaa.
    lmao!
    sorry.=]

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 6 months ago

    nice! I don’t see it at the wrong storyline.. oh well.
    LoA

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    Dr. Mousse's Buddy Icon Dr. Mousse

    Posted 6 months ago

    Her hair is shining beautifully in the moonlight as she stares down at Warren, whose hair was thrown about in a certain way that’d make an ice cube melt on the spot.)

    Huh????

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 6 months ago

    aggghhh i missed that one! grrrrrrrgle=]
    thanks you, Dr. Mousse=]

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    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 6 months ago

    haha i love it.

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    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 6 months ago

    love it. wish that would really happen someday =)
    LoA

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