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Feel the Noise [Retro Music Challenge continuation]

Jonas turned to charge out the door and saw a startled man in a faded military uniform to the side of the door, about to do the same, lone pistol at the ready. His eyes were wide with fright, as though he had a devil inside clawing to get out.

“Those men out there…” Jonas began to ask.

The uniformed man groaned, “Oh, who can it be now?”

Hyrum just laughed, “Looks like you’re in as much trouble as we are.”

“They say I killed a man…lots of men. My partner framed me as a murderer!” He was sweating bullets and looked a little faint.

“You got lucky, kid,” Jonas said with a wink. The man didn’t look inclined to agree.

“Seriously,” Hyrum added lightly, “We’ve been in worse spots. Stick with us, and you’ll have some fun…might even survive it!”

“Enough yammering,” Jonas barked cocking both his pistols and glaring out the door, “Cum on feel the noize!” And with that he charged into the sunlight, with Hyrum and their new friend close behind.

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Feel the Noise [Retro Music Challenge continuation]
YodaOnCrack
Posted 7 months ago

Oh thanx – now I’ve got that “Who can it be” song in my head and I can’t get it out… “Who can it be knocking at my door? lalalallal!!!” : ) Nice continuation though – this challenge was fun, wasn’t it?
Feel the Noise [Retro Music Challenge continuation]
Ana Cristina
Posted 7 months ago

“Come on feel the noise!” Great, now I have the song stuck on repeat mode in my head. :D
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Feel the Noise [Retro Music Challenge continuation]
Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)
Posted 7 months ago

Nice sequel. :D And now I’m in the same boat as YOC . Men At Work running through my head. (Not that there’s anything wrong with that…)
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THX 0477
Posted 7 months ago

Not that anyone seems to have struggled with the references, here they are.
Devil Inside by INXS
Who Can It Be Now by Men At Work
You Got Lucky by Tom Petty and the Heartbreakers
Cum On Feel the Noize (seriously, that’s how it’s officially spelled) by Quiet Riot

And just for funzies, the scared guy in a uniform is a loose take on the guy in this ficlet by another author.
http://ficlets.com/stories/24263
Feel the Noise [Retro Music Challenge continuation]
Jenunique
Posted 7 months ago

Great sequel. Glad to see poor John didn’t get pick up by Major Tom after all. :)
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Crown Me Tarzan, King of Mars
Posted 7 months ago

Cum on Feel the Noize! That’s my signature karaoke song (That and Mama Said Knock You Out )!
Although I prefer the ‘70’s glam-rock version by Slade.

http://tarzankingofmars.tumblr.com/post/5596743