SOMETHING SCARY (SCARY REALLY)........... READ AT YOUR OWN RISK

by DARK!

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It was a cold and stormy night. The blazzing blizzard keep us all awake. It was just my friend Pat, and me. We were in thr basement just talking. Then…... The power went out, just like that. We didn’t know what happend.

“I’m scaried.” I said.
“There’s nothing down here.” Pat replied
Then a loud crash came, it was from upstairs. Then all we heard was the wreched sound of a chain saw!! The power came back up, and in front of us we saw a bloody guy holding two heads. It was the head of my brother, and sister. Then he rushed at Pat. Before he could do anything, WAM he took his head off too.

All i saw was his body laying there, his guts and blood came squrting out! I ran for my life! He was chasing me, he was caching up fast. Then i saw the closet door, before i could think I ran and opened the door. As fast as i could i jumped in and locked it. All I heard was the chain saw rustling on the other side.

“Come out and die.” he yelled
I was too scaried to do anything. I just lay there and hoped for the best.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. SOMETHING SCARY (SCARY REALLY)........... READ AT YOUR OWN RISK

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    It was really intense and scary, awesome job.

  2. SOMETHING SCARY (SCARY REALLY)........... READ AT YOUR OWN RISK

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Intense and creepy. A very good horror story.

  3. SOMETHING SCARY (SCARY REALLY)........... READ AT YOUR OWN RISK

    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    loved it! Excellent descriptive words. It allows the reader to see the story unfold infront of them. Almost like a play. Very good.. best in its genre!

  4. SOMETHING SCARY (SCARY REALLY)........... READ AT YOUR OWN RISK

    paper flowers' Buddy Icon paper flowers

    Posted 4 months ago

    freaky! A very good and descriptive horror story…nice job.
    LoA

  5. SOMETHING SCARY (SCARY REALLY)........... READ AT YOUR OWN RISK

    DARK!'s Buddy Icon DARK!

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i tried my best

  6. SOMETHING SCARY (SCARY REALLY)........... READ AT YOUR OWN RISK

    BernerOberland's Buddy Icon BernerOberland

    Posted 4 months ago

    scary, you did a great job dude.

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