Message, Scrawled In Blood On A Rock

by Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

If you’re reading this, you’re totally screwed, and you probably know it. I didn’t, at first.

When I got here, He met me. He never introduced Himself, but I knew who He was, all the same. “Welcome,” He said.

“Where am I?” I asked Him, somewhat confused.

“You, my friend,” He said with a smile, “are in Hell.”

At first, I was stunned, speechless. I had died? And gone to Hell?! But as I looked around, I thought, That can’t be true.

“If this is Hell,” I asked, “why is it so beautiful?”

“Oh, you’ve been caught by the Lie we tell humans,” He said. ”’Hell is fire.’ ‘Hell is demons torturing you, day after day.’ The closest to the truth is, ‘Hell is separation from God.’”

“Then what is the truth?” I had to know.

“Hell,” He told me, “is separation from everyone. You are alone, for all eternity. They all go mad, eventually. But, for some, madness brings insight. And insight sometimes, sometimes, brings escape!”

I’ve found that escape! But I won’t tell you how! You’re not insane enough to understand. Yet.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Message, Scrawled In Blood On A Rock

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    creepy and very good!
    LoA

  2. Message, Scrawled In Blood On A Rock

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Thought provoking and twisted. My kind of story.

  3. Message, Scrawled In Blood On A Rock

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 6 months ago

    very thought provoking, I agree.

  4. Message, Scrawled In Blood On A Rock

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, thats a bit disturbing!
    LoA
    Love the matter-of-fact way he says “You’re in Hell.”

  5. Message, Scrawled In Blood On A Rock

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I wish I knew how to escape the madness we call life!

    Awesome, and twisted, story.

    LoA

  6. Message, Scrawled In Blood On A Rock

    Music-Hearted's Buddy Icon Music-Hearted

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I really like this. I agree with the others- this twisted perspective is very thought provoking. Nice job.
    LoA

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