The Red Creek Murders

by Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

“Sheriff Bradshaw?”

Ted Bradshaw looked at the clock. “Doc Haberstaam? What time is it?”

“2:30am,” the archaeologist said. “Sheriff, listen. The muderer you’re looking for. I may know where he is.” Ted was instantly alert. “Meet me at the north end of Red Creek Road. Hurry! We don’t have much time!”

45 minutes later, he met up with Dr. Bertram Haberstaam. “You sure about this, Doc?” the sheriff asked.

“Positive! I’ve been doing some research. The way those four were killed is reminiscent of a cult thought gone eons before the foundations of the Tower of Babel were laid. Come on.”

They trekked through the forest for almost 1/2 hour. They came upon a clearing, filled with dozens of people dancing naked around a stone altar.

“My God, Doc! All these people murdered those kids?!”

“No, not directly. Their leader did the actual killing.”

“Is he down there?”

“No,” Haberstaam said. “He’s much closer.”

Bradshaw saw a flash of steel, felt pressure on his neck, and choked as his lungs filled with his own blood.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. The Red Creek Murders

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wow! Ted is the murderer! Never saw that coming!
    LoA

  2. The Red Creek Murders

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wait, I thought Haberstaam was the killer. Really good story. Reminds me a little of that movie Frailty.

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