My eyes show a future

by sfost93

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look into my eyes you see a heart,
one that is falling apart.
Look into my eyes you see a flame,
and how it stays the same.
Look into my eyes you see the world coming to an end,
there’s no one to fight and defend
You seen the heart,
let it not fall apart.
You seen the flame,
make it not stay the same.
You see the world coming to an end,
be someone i can fight for and defend

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. My eyes show a future

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I really like this one. It may be my favorite so far. Only place you might want to change is “you seen the heart” and “you seen the flame”... I might have put “You’ve seen” in those places, but that’s the poet’s decision. I like your poetry. Keep writing!

  2. My eyes show a future

    Jayme Meiram's Buddy Icon Jayme Meiram

    Posted 4 months ago

    cuteness. i like this one, definately in my top of yours.

  3. My eyes show a future

    Question Queen of the 21st centuary.'s Buddy Icon Question Queen of the 21st centuary.

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love this, this is really amazing!

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