Cave

by cosleia

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Cold.

Dark.

Hard.

Wet.

Dripping.

Can’t see.

Terrified.

Can’t think.

Running.

Falling. Haha. So cliche.

Kill me.

No.

So stupid.

Don’t.

Will you?

Prequels

Write a prequel

Sequels

Write a sequel

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Cave

    Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)'s Buddy Icon Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very, very interesting. I like it. It’s simple, but it really conveys what’s going through the character’s head. Nice job!
    LoA

  2. Cave

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    Bizarre and a bit unsettling. Literal or metaphorical? Could be either, I suppose.
    LoA

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