if only i could

by ♥Bridget

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You treat me like property,
like i feel no pain.
do You feel like Your insults
are all in vain?

do You think i don’t feel
all the hurt in Your words?

am i nothing to You?
Your my everything.
to you i’m nothing special, nothing new.
i was right i am nothing to You.

so when You tell me that You love me,
and i see through Your lies,
is there any real reason
for all of the ‘whys’?

You hate me, admit it!
it’s all in your eyes.
You hate me admit it!
it’s me You despise.

i would hate You back.
if only i could.
i need to leave You,
i know that i should.

how could i stay
with someone like You
i’d be hurting myself
but that’s nothing new!

so i stay with You.
because You were right all along.
i am nothing without You.
i suppose that’s why i’m writting this song.

(this poem is the rough draft for a bit of a song)

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. if only i could

    ♥Bridget's Buddy Icon ♥Bridget

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i would appreciate any and all comments on this poem/song. thnx

  2. if only i could

    -Deleted-'s Buddy Icon -Deleted-

    Posted 3 months ago

    So, who is this one about?

  3. if only i could

    ♥Bridget's Buddy Icon ♥Bridget

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    nobody that you know… sorry

  4. if only i could

    -Deleted-'s Buddy Icon -Deleted-

    Posted 3 months ago

    alrighttt.

  5. if only i could

    ♥Bridget's Buddy Icon ♥Bridget

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    yep… well whatevs…

  6. if only i could

    Question Queen of the 21st centuary.'s Buddy Icon Question Queen of the 21st centuary.

    Posted 3 months ago

    hey cassie!

  7. if only i could

    lena's Buddy Icon lena

    Posted 3 months ago

    i love this cass. is it about…...?

  8. if only i could

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is really good.

  9. if only i could

    Tibby-Marie O'Connor's Buddy Icon Tibby-Marie O'Connor

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    is this aboutt algastat ? << i cant spell
    if so, BEAT HIM DOWN ! or let me (:
    otherwise,
    AMAZING ! anddd i love youu !
    goood jobbb

  10. if only i could

    ♥Bridget's Buddy Icon ♥Bridget

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    thanks lilly. and yes it’s about what you think… i really apprecaite the comments guys and Tibb yeah it is and yeah you can.

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