Crazy In Love

by Lone Writer

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Got me hoping you page me right now your kiss’
Got me hoping you save me right now
Lookin so crazy your love’s got me lookin
Got me lookin so crazy your love
“Just look at her, man!” Jordan cried.
“I’m not looking.” Matt said. “I’m done with women! Especially those who sing Karaoke.”
“But she is fine!” Jordan insisted.
“I don’t care how fine she is!” Matt said, still refusing to look. “I told you I’m done with women.”
“You can’t just say that.” Jordan said, “Just because of one bad expierience-”
“Not one, Jordan!” Matt cried, turning around and gaping at him. “Twelve!”
“Well maybe this time it will be different.” Jordan said, shrugging his shoulders.
“No, it won’t be!” Matt exclaimed, running a hand through his dark hair. “I’m so tired of being used! Especially to get to you!”
Matt saw Jordan wince, he knew it was true. All the girls that Jordan had picked up for Matt had used him to get to Jordan.
“I’m sorry, its not your fault.” Matt apologized.
“No, you’re right.” Jordan sighed.

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Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Crazy In Love

    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted 4 months ago

    I like this.

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    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted 4 months ago

    fool thing’s not letting me rate. four stars.

  3. Crazy In Love

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    Nice job setting up the tone with the song lyrics and then a great back and forth between the two friends.

  4. Crazy In Love

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 4 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    A good setup. Everyone’s got that one hot friend (unless, of course, you’re the hot friend, in which case I guess you could say the opposite).

  5. Crazy In Love

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    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    yeah, I know how Matt feels. Not that it’s happened to me twelve times.. but yeah. Nice start here. =)

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    J.B. Williams' Buddy Icon J.B. Williams

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice setup for the song into the story. Sound like they’re at a party.

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    Posted 4 months ago

    ooh…I like this…

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