First Memory

by Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

I saw people all around me. Shouting. Yelling. But I couldn’t understand what they were saying. All I knew what I couldn’t breath! All I felt was the fire in my lungs as they tried to get oxygen, and the burning of the rope around my neck.

Suddenly, I was back in the cathedral. I gasped for air, as though I had actually been there. “God!” I shouted, hoarsely. That brought the pain back anew. A fit of coughing seized me.

I looked up at her. Tears streamed down her face. “Are you all right?” she asked.

I couldn’t speak clearly, yet, but I nodded. After a few minutes, I could speak again. “That… My, God, you were trapped in that poor woman’s body until the end?!”

She nodded. “Mary was a sweet woman who didn’t deserve what they did to her. It was horrible what happened, but I’ve been through worse.”

“Worse?!” I said, stunned.

“Some where in here I was shot and left to die in a mass grave. Took me three days to die.” She shivered at the thought. “You sure about this?”

I nodded. “For you, it’s worth it.”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. First Memory

    Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)'s Buddy Icon Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

    Posted 4 months ago

    What have I gotten myself into? Another Ficlets epic? This was supposed to be a two or three, part story! LOL
    Ah, well. So long as people are enjoying it.

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    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Man, this could make for a long trip down memory lane if they keep opening boxes of death memories. 8O

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I am really enjoying it! This is a really interesting series.
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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I think stories decided for themselves when they’re over. At least the best ones do. :)
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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oops, I meant to write “stories decide for themselves.”

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