A poem

by Disturbed Youth

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Saw you
You saw me
it was like we were ment to be

I talked to you
You talked to me
But did you really look at.

He’s perfect and
I’m not
But for a moment I forgot

I called Him
he called me
That was when it would be gin.

I kissed him
he Kissed me
You know I love him and I know
he loves me

[ditto as the first one]

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  1. A poem

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted about 1 month ago

    But did you really look at

    I love Kale’s writing!

  2. A poem

    paper flowers' Buddy Icon paper flowers

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Best line: But did you really look at.
    What!? What did you really look at!? Your face? A squirrel? The unibrow? So many possibilities!
    lol, if anyone outside our group reads this they’ll be sooo confused. :-P

  3. A poem

    paper flowers' Buddy Icon paper flowers

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Best line: But did you really look at.
    What!? What did you really look at!? Your face? A squirrel? The unibrow? So many possibilities!
    lol, if anyone outside our group reads this they’ll be sooo confused. :-P

  4. A poem

    invisibility_disability's Buddy Icon invisibility_disability

    Posted about 1 month ago

    omg, lol. :) your cousin’s writing is amaaaaaaaaaaazing. XD
    ROFL
    LoA

  5. A poem

    Dragon_sun 515's Buddy Icon Dragon_sun 515

    Posted about 1 month ago

    I agree with paper flowers: Look at what? And I once again agree with her: I’m confuzzled!

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