The Tattoo

by Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

I always enjoyed watching her get dressed in the morning. But today, something was bothering me. My eyes roved over her body, trying to figure out what was out of place. Then I spotted it.

“Sweetheart,” I asked her. “When the hell did you get a tattoo?”

She turned to me, a look on her face that was pure amusement. “I got that before we ever met!”

I looked at her, trying to determine if she was joking. “No, no, no,” I said. “There is no way we’ve lived together 10 years and I never noticed the tattoo.”

“Oh, that reminds me,” she said, dropping her clothes on the bed. “I have a message here for you.”

She handed me a piece of paper. It read:
Honey,
Had to go out of town for business at last minute. Back in three days. Tried to call, but your cell was dead.
My twin sister is in town. She’ll be staying with us for the week.
Have fun, you two.
Love,
Suzi

Out of town. Twin sister. Identical twins. Oh, no.

“Hello, Erica,” I groaned. She smiled.

This was going to be a very, very long week.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    atllta's Buddy Icon atllta

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great. Puts you right into the scene and has playful overtones. Very well written indeed.

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    idreamoflilies' Buddy Icon idreamoflilies

    Posted 5 months ago

    haha nice!

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    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Temptation. Sounds like that twin is a bit of a schemer.

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 5 months ago

    I am a twin! I hope that never happens to me! My bf better know the difference! mhmm! lol
    LoA

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    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Uh oh… Sounds like trouble already. :)

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    butterflygirl6106's Buddy Icon butterflygirl6106

    Posted 5 months ago

    whooo! sounds like twins are still trading places in life.

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    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    whoa.. too funny.. twist end.. great dialog.

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